More Haiku

Each of these is for one of my children... can you tell which is which?

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water on the floor

experiment gone awry

clean it up yourself

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forceful affection

your love is exuberant.

don't jump on our heads

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you talk all day long

conversing with no real words.

you don't seem to mind

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imagination

boy with a cape and a sword

come back to earth soon

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(I am slowly getting my voice back, and slowly getting better. Thanks for the warm wishes.)

Comments

[#1mama]

The first one is Kid A, the second is YaYa, the third is Solo and the 4th is Leafy? Am I right? Wish I was there enjoying all of that....sometime soon!

[lagata]

Kid A, YaYa, Solo, Leafy... at first I thought YaYa when I read you talk all day long - but then you said conversing without real words.... That doesn't sound like YaYa to me :)

Glad you are feeling better!
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[Eleanor]

love experiment
with imaginary words
helps her voice return.
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[blackbird]

Sending a hug for you to feel better!
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[Anon]

Have you seen this?

http://typetees.threadless.com/product/623/Haikus_Are_Easy_But_Sometimes

It made me smile! Yours do, of course, make sense. And they made me smile, too!